Welcome to my blog, I'm a student at Paroa School on the West Coast of New Zealand.
Hi Katie, what a good start. I like how you put why you think the rats are starving. Maybe next time a little more detail in your story would make interesting reading. Keep up the good work. Sharron
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Hi Katie, what a good start. I like how you put why you think the rats are starving. Maybe next time a little more detail in your story would make interesting reading. Keep up the good work. Sharron
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