Yesterday we were learning to persuade people so the teacher sent us a site and we could pick one to write about to get people on your side or to buy it or to keep it. I chose create a new candy persuade people to buy it. Hope you like my blog post.
wow Katie i would really like to try that.its so cheap too.maybe when its out ill buy it.also nice caption.😝😜
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Hi katie this is amazing! reading it makes my mouth water! I like how many describing words you use, it makes it really easy to read. Its so good that I think that a lolly might use it as advertising. The only thing I would say is a bit more writing and less pictures.
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